SCP-7334 / Discussion

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DrMindbender 21 Aug 2023 12:05

This Article is a remix of [[SCP-133|SCP-133]], written by Unknown Author and Aelanna

I'd like to give a huge shoutout to everyone who gave my critique during the drafting process:

AstersQuill, cheesybreezy, Dr Blackbox, DrDapper, Hikarinu, newnykacolaquantum, Overload Imminent, Reasonably Psychotic, TheChunk, The_Spider_Queen

If I forgot to shout you out or if I entered your username incorrectly, please let me know so I can fix it.

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DrMindbender 21 Aug 2023 23:17

There's currently a technical difficulty uploading the cognitohazard image. I'm working to fix it

Update: image fixed

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SCP-7334: +1

Purplayoss 30 Aug 2023 16:06

I barely understood anything in this piece, but it was beautiful all the same. Anyone able to explain it for me?

Re: SCP-7334: +1

DrMindbender 30 Aug 2023 19:31

Long story short D-2890 went back in time to start humanity after Mekhane's robot race went extinct, and he ends up becoming the Administrator of the SCP Foundation.

LORDXVNV 04 Sep 2023 07:01

What does the anomaly actually do?

The connection between the anomaly and the narrative is weak — the anomaly is only ever described and tested as a functional portal but the story is about the genesis of humanity and reframing large sweeping portions of SCP lore including the Administrator and Mekhane. I don't see why you framed this as a 133 remix when the vast bulk of the narrative is a 2000 or 217 remix and if you'd sold it as that from the beginning I highly suspect the jump from a table style test log to sweeping odyssey through deep time would have been less jarring and unnatural feeling.

Maxyfran73 08 Sep 2023 09:18

Can't say I'm a big fan of this one. The first bit feels fine, an interesting expansion upon 133, but then we get into the logs, and they just feel really weird. There's this hint of 5000 with this new decaying world, but not a lot feels like it makes sense, then we get the info dump, then the whole 2000 bit and the administrator parts just feel attached haphazardly, and it all ends up just sort of sludgy, like, the pacing is weird, the execution is weird, and I end up feeling like I didn't enjoy anything about this piece. So yeah, really not a fan of the execution of this one. -1