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House? More like BURGER

theUnfunnyOne 17 Jul 2023 01:59

Alright, second attempt at this.

This time I got feedback. I fixed the issues and changed the name to "Brilliant Burgers" to avoid confusion (No, TheFlatulence, “Beastly Burgers” is not a reference to MrBeast.)

Thanks to StrangerSwing for critiquing. (Barbarous Bread also critiqued but I posted this before they posted their review)

(also i have no idea how to do the thing where it links someones profile)

The “Legally Uncontainable” class comes from SCP-6012.

Some fun facts about this with some spoilers

• Before this was reposted the company’s name was “Beastly Burgers” but as I pointed out earlier apparently this was too close to “MrBeast Burgers.”
• The original motto was “HAVE IT YOUR WAY” (like burger king) instead of “THE BEST BUNS IN THE BUSINESS” but I changed it to be more original.
• The idea for this came when I looked at an abandoned restaurant. Not sure how the idea spiraled out of control and became this.
• The number (7403) is a reference to 4703

(Edit: Thank you for +20!)

Last edited on 05 Aug 2023 11:19 by theUnfunnyOne Show more

Re: House? More like BURGER

blahhhheee 27 Jul 2023 16:43

Second time's the charm my friend.

+1

Platy_pie 17 Jul 2023 08:13

Complements to the chef, the burgers where brilliant thank you very much +1

+1

VapidPoem 17 Jul 2023 10:04

The burgers were great. And the presentation was amazing! Hope to see this small chain grow famous! +1

+1

Downwardghostly 17 Jul 2023 14:25

Fast food employment has never been so easy!

Re: +1

theUnfunnyOne 17 Jul 2023 21:17

Yeah, especially when the fast food is right at your door.. or in your house.

TroutMaskReplica 18 Jul 2023 01:37

Ohhoho, now this? This is really good.

Not only is the idea delightfully ridiculous with a hint of horror, the escalation is good, and i like how it works as a metaphor for capitalism, funny enough.

The usage of YWTGTSYT was well written, and the section at the end was fantastic, as well as the snippets between the two characters was great.

Eager +1. Keep up the great work

Edit: ALSO FORGOT TO MENTION legally uncontained is on of my favorite esoteric classes, and seeing it used again was fantastic.

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Last edited on 18 Jul 2023 01:40 by TroutMaskReplica Show more

AtticusOmundson 31 Oct 2023 05:21

Anarcho-Capitalism be like "What if we just bought the laws lol"

Last edited on 31 Oct 2023 05:22 by AtticusOmundson Show more