The Ship of Screams / Discussion

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HarryBlank 29 May 2023 10:04

Oh, you know, just a short little romance story. Totally normal and restrained.

Thanks to Crow-Cat for creating Vampire Boat, which is of course a completely natural thing to pair your emotionally stunted administrator with, thank you UraniumEmpire for making that obvious connection for all of us!

And also for running a very fun contest.

Rounderhouse 30 May 2023 04:04

"My name is Vampire Boat."

credits roll

Maxyfran73 31 May 2023 17:26

Nice boat.

For real though, the character work and action scene were really good. Not too familiar with Karen, but her personality here shines brightly, like the sun, but like, in a less positive way. In turn, the vampire boat is a perfect complement to her price as a character; loved how you wrote the guy here. The way the plot develop's great too.

All in all, excellent written, as always. +1~

notgull 31 May 2023 21:00

What’s here is alright. I found myself skimming a little; maybe I’m just tired, or the intro book didn’t grab me. The dialogue is wonderful, and the character arcs of both characters involved felt pretty real. I also like how you can really visualize the entire environment; it makes the tale really fun to visualize. My only real complaint aside from the intro hook being a little rusty is the length; I think that this could be shorter.

+1

OriTiefling 02 Jun 2023 18:48

I can confidently say I did not expect to enjoy a tale about a woman nearly having sex with a boat but wtf do I know. +1

apiphanee 29 Feb 2024 20:27

as soon as i saw the no reflection part i fucking knew it would be vampire boat, and as soon as it was revealed i actually cackled

+1