Rita Learns About The Birds And The Bees In The Worst Way / Discussion

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and then she plagiarized all over those guys

TyGently 28 May 2023 08:22

Reserved. Thanks to tawny0 and anorrack for crit, and to Ralliston for submitting Queen Mab to the contest.

notgull 28 May 2023 17:15

Got a decent chuckle out of me. My early complaints were smoothed out later on by the ridiculous ending. I prefer the companion tale, but this is still good stuff.

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Ralliston 28 May 2023 18:09

This is really cool — the dialogue is really funny (bits like "I need you. It’s a socialist emergency." are particular standouts) and the ending is just hilarious. I also really like how technically, our entries don't contradict each other and kind of even work with each other. So, you know, fun!

ch00bakka 31 May 2023 17:12

damn u really got tanksy in this one like i know we made him together but this is exactly what he's like in my head. exactly the kind of guy to mime specifically shooting someone w a mosin nagant. 10/10. +1.

Maxyfran73 03 Jun 2023 07:14

Pretty solid piece. Fits well with Cool War 2, and it's overall an enjoyable, funny read.

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