I am requesting a greenlight for a new SCP concept. My current provisional name for it is Portal to an Invaded World, it is a lake of an unknown liquid in Indonesia, which sends people who enter it into an alternate reality where the Foundation and all world governments are currently fighting an extradimensional invasion by a nation referred to as the "Sayasha Menace". Please let me know if you want to see my sandbox draft for it.
You’re here to get crit on your idea, not draft. Also you broke the format, read the “Must read”
Locking this thread as another exists for the same concept in progress. Reviewers, please comment here: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15798683/seeking-greenlight
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I have opened a new greenlight request post, and am sending you the link to it. This post is formatted according to what you told me-it should be correctly formatted.
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15798683/seeking-greenlight