Dreams are weird! I love everything about this. I think the juxtaposition between the two seemingly distinct anomalies is a cool effect, and the way they begin to line up as we come closer to the end is cinematic.
Pretty haunting, even. Hearty +1.
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I find this extremely unsettling, so +1. Imo the amount of entries is just right for the concept and it the ending doesn't come off as formulaic which it absolutely could have if the execution wasn't perfect. But… it was. Great work.
Amazing. Instead of utilizing dreams as a narrative tool to explain and give more contextual clues as to what was happening in reality, you managed to do the exact opposite and instead utilized the real-world events to explain what was happening in the true center of the narrative: the dreams…and to terrifying effect, too.
+1.
I've always thought that my dreams are very, very, wrong. Walking through my house I look around and come to understand that despite everything my mind is telling me, this is not my house. There are too many turns, turns in the wrong places, rooms are larger than they should be, and finally the voices coming from places that they should not be coming from.
When I realize that my dreams are lying to me, I tend to wake up, only to have the same dream again a few nights later, only to wake up again when I realize how wrong things are. Sometimes I wonder what this house really looks like, lucid dreaming and all that. But really, why do I care? It's not my house, so I think it shouldn't matter what it looks like. But it is my house, but it looks nothing like my house.
Anyway good SCP liryn.
