SCP-7121 / Discussion

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What a Cawmation

JorgeMtzb 11 Mar 2023 00:48

Hey it's me, JorgeMtzb! ^-^
Special Thanks to: ExiAsWell, Zoobeeny, and Doctor Fullham, as well as everybody in the IRC chat who helped with extensive constructive criticism and help with the proofreading of this article as well as to everyone in this wonderful community. This couldn't have been done without yall! This is my first posted SCP, I put a lot of effort into it so hopefully you guys like it! I'd love to hear any and all thoughts and discussion about it.

Re: What a Cawmation

ExiAsWell 11 Mar 2023 01:21

I’m super happy to see this posted, and I’m glad I could help! Looking forward to more critiques in the future!

Cawmitting Tax Evasion

a_local_crow 11 Mar 2023 01:32

Saw this in the IRC chat- SO HAPPY IT'S UP! Fastest +1 in my LIFE!

In this household, we love this bird.

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Palias 11 Mar 2023 02:42

Imagining the O5-Council hiding from a crow is hilarious.

+1.

Uncle Nicolini 11 Mar 2023 15:41

the addendum is wholly unnecessary and the article would be better off without it. other than that, this is well done. good job.

Doctor Fullham 11 Mar 2023 16:38

Happy to see this up! A joy to crit, a joy to read, and a joy to upvote. Perfectly toes the line of a more comedic SCP without going into -J territory.

Tuckamore 23 Mar 2023 07:02

There's a few SPaG errors in this that make it feel a bit sloppy, and the final addendum is really too long and repetitive for what it's trying to convey.

That being said, this is one of those articles that lives or dies on its concept, and this concept is both very funny and very well executed. Please give that wonderful, terrible bird my kudos, as well as my +1.

Dino--Draws 14 Oct 2023 01:42

This is amazing and the mental image of it all has me giggling

+1