What's your emergency? Looking for critique and/or thoughts.

Summary:

Taking the phrase "Reopening old wounds" to a literal level.

What's your emergency? Looking for critique and/or thoughts.

JorgeMtzb 28 Feb 2023 02:38

I've been working on this SCP for a while now. I've gotten the greenlights necessary and I now have a complete draft of my concept, so I'm now looking for criticism and thoughts on my story and writing.

The SCP itself consists of bandages that reopen any previously inflicted wounds under the area they are applied to (regardless of when they happened) and make injuries progress and get worse much faster, as well as a bottle of pills that takes the effects to… the next level.

http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/jorgemtzb

Word Count: 2586 (Includes somewhat graphic descriptions of events.)

Staff notice: requisite greenlights obtained here https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15643555/what-s-your-emergency

Last edited on 28 Feb 2023 07:30 by Zyn Show more

Critique Team - Captain Post

Zyn 07 Mar 2023 06:56

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