New SCP - Overall Draft Critique

Summary:

Creating an SCP an would like some crit on it, as it's been removed 2 times after edits

New SCP - Overall Draft Critique

Szhip 28 Feb 2023 02:32

Creating an SCP an would like some crit on it, as it's been removed 2 times after edits; Both times were because of downvotes.

I moved and trimmed your thread summary, since it was taking up extra space in the main forum screen. Try to keep thread descriptions (the text in the little box under the thread title) and titles short so you don't crowd out other authors in the forum listing. ~Zyn

~770 words total. Description isn't my strongsuit, but I'd like someone to give me some type of critique if possible, would be greatly appreciated.

Sandbox link: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/insightful-orb-draft

Description: Colored Orb that provides positive or negative effects based on it's temperature.

Last edited on 28 Feb 2023 07:31 by Zyn Show more

Critique Team - Junior Staff Post

gashv 28 Feb 2023 02:46

Author, per the greenlighting policy: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies first-time authors seeking draft critique in the forums must get their concept(s) greenlighted in the Ideas Critique forum and/or IRC chatrooms.

Please first go to the Ideas forum or the chat, give a quick summary (for the Ideas forum, please follow the instructions in the required reading thread) of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone requests it).

During the conceptualization stage, reviewers can let you know if something similar already exists on the site, and/or tell you if there is anything that would prevent them from wanting to read a full draft. These issues are more effectively addressed earlier on in the writing process.

If you have already received two greenlights, please note from whom and where you received them. If you would like to skip the greenlighting process, you can use the IRC chatrooms for draft reviews.