Educating a Fifthist Angel (CI format)

Summary:

The Philosophy of how the CI deals with their cells

Educating a Fifthist Angel (CI format)

Ethagon 26 Feb 2023 23:19

Draftlink: http://timebox.wikidot.com/sc-18-005-18-350

My worries about this one are:

• Are there any issues with how the article looks?
• Is the format itself understandable and enjoyable to read? I will tweak parts of it if it isn't.
• Is the dialogue good or is it too much?
• Do you think anything should be clearer (both with and without having read the first part)?

Thanks for reading!

Critique Team - Captain Post

Zyn 06 Mar 2023 07:16

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