Should not be treated quite so well methinks
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Wait, has SCP-657 ever met people he couldn't predict the death of BEFORE coming into SCP custody?? This is basic consideration!
You know, I think the tone of this one is a little off. Spends a lot of time talking about his past, and it's got the crossed-out containment procedures that I think could be better-written.
I think this has potential, would benifit from an experiment log
This is another one where I think an experiment log would actually ruin it a little.
Ok, so Abel gives him seizures. I'm going to assume it's the same way about others who can regenerate and such, and that immortals will just work like the ones he can't read.
What about 'technical' death? People who die for a few minutes, and them come back?
the second addendum is terrible, and should be removed.
Made a few minor edits where the Foundation was referred to as "SCP."
This article has potential, but feels lacking. I'd also agree on the last addendum detracting from the article.
I really dislike this one, but it's not for the writing, which is fine. But the concept: Ugh. I just hate the standard boilerplate 'fate' shit that this is referencing. If he could be wrong in his predictions with normal people (but almost always spot on) I think I'd like the implications of that far more. As it stands … I suppose I am downvoting for philosophical reasons, in a way, but I also think this trope is just damn overdone. Plus, he's pretty generic in his creepiness.
Actually on reread I don't know why I got so worked up by that. Shrug.
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