I Offer You Eternal Sleep

Summary:

First time SCP article!

I Offer You Eternal Sleep

MissBirdy 28 Jan 2023 20:09

Hello!

I've been writing my first article and I wanted to get some feedback/critique. Specifically, I was wanting to know where I could improve in the areas of scientific language, dialogue, and pacing. But feel free to note anything that you notice that you feel I should be aware of.

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Thank you!

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Zyn 07 Feb 2023 07:55

Since this thread has been on the forum listing for a week with no feedback yet, this is a quick general information post from staff for the author. If you are still seeking feedback on this material, please remember to contact reviewers directly to request critique (if you haven't already reached out).

This thread has information on reaching out to reviewers: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-13282692/how-to-get-more-reviews

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