Chaos Theory I / Discussion

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Author Post I

tiredsn0w 28 Jan 2023 03:00

Chaos Theory turned out much longer than I anticipated, and Alzin Cdag had the idea to split it into two parts. This makes my pre-typed Author Post be a bit janky, so excuse me for writing by the seat of my pants. There will be a more complete Author Post on part II, if you're into that sort of thing.

Thank you as always to my beta readers, allyzero (and crynkl this time!), for giving me feedback on whatever things I end up writing, as well as just simply reading them (along with Charlie80827, Fierce fauna, and SilverScribbles)!

Thank you to BESW, penguin, Cameo, Verso, Wolf, and others from MBD2.0 for help with specifics around mobility aids, stimming, and miscellaneous word choices.

And thank you, for reading this. I hope you liked it.

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SilverScribbles 29 Jan 2023 22:44

So, my actions had unforeseen consequences.

From that moment on, I was sucked into the story, and too engrossed to willingly tear my gaze away from the plot unfolding before me, but once my mind clicked at the final period, and the past tens of minutes of pure, undisturbed reading sunk in, I couldn't help but appreciate this beautiful part I.

From the first sentence, the the beautiful last one, I can't help but feel that I would have been satisfied, even if this were a single story.

And yet, it isn't.

There's a second part and I'm going to read it right now.

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