Test Flight

Summary:

In 1999, a spacecraft appears out of thin air above the Atlantic Ocean.

Test Flight

ResearcherVortex 27 Jan 2023 14:48

Here's my forum thread with greenlights from Uncle Nicolini and R4_EX:
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15501314/seeking-greenlight-test-flight

Here's my sandbox page:
https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/researchervortex4

2.3k word skip about a time-travelling spacecraft and its mysterious origins, including a discovery log, 4 interviews, and 2 additional documents. This is my first SCP, so there will be parts which need improving, the email log is mostly there to clear up some elements of the plot/timeline, since a couple people I talked to got a little confused. Open to critique, I'd appreciate it if someone gave it a look.

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Re: Test Flight

SYTYCFanon 19 Feb 2023 01:44

*Here from the official Discord*

So I'm always down for a good time travel anomaly and while this does that Boostrap paradox well, the issue comes in the form of the Dialogue. Frankly none of the characters are particularly interesting and they mostly just exposit to each other throughout the whole piece.

You also describe in your discord forum that there was to be a meeting between the O5 Councial and the department of temporal anomalies to make the timeline seen at the end and as of me writing this it hasn't been added which I feel would make the piece feel more complete.