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(account deleted) 26 Jan 2023 02:09
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KOH
Road Runners
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Summary:
Did you ever imagine something running alongside the car?
(account deleted) 26 Jan 2023 02:09
P.S. I have read the rules and I would like to mention I received green lights in the IRC and also had received inspiration from a member who had a different version of this SCP in their drafts
Can you provide the names of your greenlighters, and properly credit the user whose material you "received inspiration" from?
Drfullham and soundchaser thought it was a good idea in the IRC and I took inspiration from SoundChasers sandbox with permission
KOH
If it’s not a bother, please could I receive a critique? Not just about the forum post itself but the SCP I’m passionate about writing?
KOH
As a general note, instead of replying to your own comments, please edit your previous post using the "edit" function under the "options" tab to the lower right of every comment. That helps prevent spam, and is noted in the Site Rules.
If it’s not a bother, please could I receive a critique?
Staff typically don't give "since you're here" feedback when addressing forum guidelines, since that can inadvertently encourage breaking of rules for extra feedback attention.
If you're having trouble getting further replies on a thread, you can look at this thread for options to contact reviewers: http://www.scp-wiki.net/forum/t-13282692/how-to-get-more-reviews
I give up on this SCP, goodbye.
To others, make sure your forum posts are to Zyn's standards because that's clearly the only thing that they will judge you on, quite frankly it's just condescending and rude. I hope in the future your fOrUm PoSt GeNeRaL gUiDeS rUleS AnD LaWs don't dissuade people from wanting to create their own SCP, I'm sure a lot of people are sick of the criticism on their posts instead of their SCP.
KOH
Noting for records-keeping that I reached out to Doctor Fullham and Sound Chaser, and both confirmed that they did not greenlight the concept.
As a general note to authors, typically it is best to be able to provide screenshot proof of a greenlight given in chat, and/or ask your greenlighters to post in your forum thread so it is clear that the greenlights were actually given.
Okay, you gave a good portion of information, but you should make the stages you mention clearer by punctuating them, for instance:
-Stage one:
-Stage two:
-Stage three:
-As many stages as you like.
Another thing you could do add subtitles and others to make it cleaner and easier for the reader to jump straight to what they want to see. I usually jump to said subtitles when reading other SCP-files because i'm for example not that interested in containment procedures.
Otherwise i absolutely LOVE the concept, something that could happen to everyone, i.e. creepypasty, simple but unsettling enough. Develop more things this SCP does and you might creep any readers when riding any vehicle.
Lordeaglemeagle
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