Concept Critique: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-15542952
Sandbox: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/zhun-ao
Word Count: Almost 3500 words.
Brief Summary: A tale that introduces two secondary school boys, each with their own odd behavioral quirks, and two black gloves—one from a lost-and-found box and another that leads to a horrible accident.
Main Areas of Concern:
- Character Introductions
- Sentence structure
- Ending
No greenlights given in the Concept Critique Forum, but I'm not a first-time author.
This tale is a part of an arc about the discovery of a glove that can essentially turn someone into the Juggernaut from the X-men, but learning from my Coldpost2023 entry, "Black Glove", I'm working on making the characters seem more real.
Thank you in advance for reading.
Update 2023-02-10: I just extended the ending to a climax in the story arc.
