Seeking approval (SCP-████)

Summary:

SCP-████ is a vulture that self-incinerates and reanimates

Seeking approval (SCP-████-J

Lesnotfound 24 Jan 2023 11:00

SCP-████ is a vulture that self-incinerates and reanimates, when a person wearing ANY instance of 24-carat gold comes between 1-2 meter range. The backstory of this SCP is long and nebulous, and will be explained in a Tale called "Audia, Keeper of The Graves".

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Last edited on 25 Jan 2023 07:39 by Zyn Show more

Critique Team - Captain Post

Zyn 25 Jan 2023 07:39

Author, per the greenlighting policy: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies first-time authors seeking draft critique in the forums must get their concept(s) greenlighted in the Ideas Critique forum and/or IRC chatrooms.

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Re: Seeking approval (SCP-████)

Dr_Lamas 26 Jan 2023 13:55

This looks like a cheap version of a phoenix, maybe add something more original to it? Like eating and turning corpses of burned people into zombies or something? (that idea is the worst, i know, it was only an example)

Staff Post- Forum Crit Team

Uncle Nicolini 26 Jan 2023 17:48

LordEagleMeagle, please mind the site's Criticism Policy. Feedback in the forums should be relatively in-depth, and specific to the material at hand rather than a generic response that could apply to multiple threads.