i need help with my new artical

Summary:

ok so i think my scp is trash and i want to improve it

i need help with my new artical

yetmexmanmen 19 Jan 2023 01:46

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Last edited on 19 Jan 2023 03:08 by OriTiefling Show more

never mind

yetmexmanmen 19 Jan 2023 02:43

never mind i got it prof read

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OriTiefling 19 Jan 2023 03:09

Author, per the greenlighting policy: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies first-time authors seeking draft critique in the forums must get their concept(s) greenlighted in the Ideas Critique forum and/or IRC chatrooms.

Please first go to the Ideas forum or the chat, give a quick summary (for the Ideas forum, please follow the instructions in the required reading thread) of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone requests it).

During the conceptualization stage, reviewers can let you know if something similar already exists on the site, and/or tell you if there is anything that would prevent them from wanting to read a full draft. These issues are more effectively addressed earlier on in the writing process.

If you have already received two greenlights, please note from whom and where you received them. If you would like to skip the greenlighting process, you can use the IRC chatrooms for draft reviews.

Also, per the Draft Forum's policy: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies your draft thread is being deferred due to a number of basic issues that need to be addressed by yourself before in-depth critique is viable. Please make use of the resources provided to correct the following:

• 10+ grammar/mechanics errors:
  • General Writing Resource thread https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-871935/general-writing-resource-thread
  • Elements of Style: http://vrici.lojban.org/~cowan/style-revised.html
  • Grammarly or another spellchecker/writing assistance program

• Severe lack of clinical tone:
  • This overview of clinical tone: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/clinical-tone-declassified
  • This reference for specific scientific words: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/technical-words
  • These college-level resources for writing formally: http://www.aje.com/en/arc/editing-tip-maintaining-formal-tone-scientific-writing/
  • http://academicguides.waldenu.edu/writingcenter/scholarlyvoice/tone
  • https://healthcare.utah.edu/brand-and-style-guide/writing-guide.php

Last edited on 19 Jan 2023 03:09 by OriTiefling Show more

Note

Reverend Fox 19 Jan 2023 04:51

Noting that this has been posted to the mainlist here:
https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/scp-7178

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