Marionette

Summary:

A marionette that can control a human, and corrupts the user

Marionette

exitsandman 16 Jan 2023 19:10

Relatively short page, 5 - minute read at maximum.
https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/exitsandman

Last edited on 16 Jan 2023 19:13 by exitsandman Show more

Critique Team - Captain Post

Zyn 17 Jan 2023 07:19

Author, (as noted below) per the greenlighting policy: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies first-time authors seeking draft critique in the forums must get their concept(s) greenlighted in the Ideas Critique forum and/or IRC chatrooms.

Please first go to the Ideas forum or the chat, give a quick summary (for the Ideas forum, please follow the instructions in the required reading thread) of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone requests it).

During the conceptualization stage, reviewers can let you know if something similar already exists on the site, and/or tell you if there is anything that would prevent them from wanting to read a full draft. These issues are more effectively addressed earlier on in the writing process.

If you have already received two greenlights, please note from whom and where you received them. If you would like to skip the greenlighting process, you can use the IRC chatrooms for draft reviews.

Re: Marionette

gashv 16 Jan 2023 21:56

(not a mod)

As per the draft forum policies, for first time authors it is required to get two greenlights on their concept before making a post here on the draft forums, from your idea forum i can see that you haven't gotten any greenlights so there is a decent chance that a mod will leave a warning later.

As to get greenlights, i reccomend reaching out to users on the Butterfly squad or asking for critique in the discord and/orc IRC critters chatroom