[SEEKING CRITIQUE] An Anomalous MTF Squad

[SEEKING CRITIQUE] An Anomalous MTF Squad

JohnathanWretch 14 Jan 2023 13:47

Page Type: SCP Article

Word Count: 800

Help I'm Looking for: I need help with Grammar and Punctuation. The tests are kind of bland and I don't know how to fix them, if you have other test ideas and ways to fix them please post. I also need help getting a bigger vocabulary, any suggestions for words to switch out I'd appreciate that too.

Summary: A MTF Squad made of personnel turned anomalous by unknown causes, yet makes a team with supernatural powers of the Ancient Greek Gods. Not related to ANY of the MANY Greek SCPs out there.

Link: https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/scp-idea-1-jw

One more thing.. please don't click on the links at the bottom of the page, they have other SCPs but they're not ready yet so please don't click on it. (If you do click on one of the links, don't proceed to SCP-IDEA-3)

Last edited on 14 Jan 2023 13:56 by JohnathanWretch Show more

Critique Team - Vice Captain Post

OriTiefling 14 Jan 2023 14:47

Author, per the greenlighting policy: https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-10629348/new-draft-forum-policies first-time authors seeking draft critique in the forums must get their concept(s) greenlighted in the Ideas Critique forum and/or IRC chatrooms.

Please first go to the Ideas forum or the chat, give a quick summary (for the Ideas forum, please follow the instructions in the required reading thread) of the concept you want to write up (don't link the draft unless someone requests it).

During the conceptualization stage, reviewers can let you know if something similar already exists on the site, and/or tell you if there is anything that would prevent them from wanting to read a full draft. These issues are more effectively addressed earlier on in the writing process.

If you have already received two greenlights, please note from whom and where you received them. If you would like to skip the greenlighting process, you can use the IRC chatrooms for draft reviews.