Seeking crit: SCP-ANGEL-J

Summary:

Beautiful, angelic angels

Seeking crit: SCP-ANGEL-J

SilverScribbles 13 Jan 2023 18:54

Word count: 2,146

Greenlights: Here

Draft: Second tab

Main Concerns: I feel like many areas, especially the Description and Interviews are too lengthy for something that depends on the reader making it to the end. I also feel like it may have been too obvious in some points. Am also considering a little note within the image collapsible with June calling them "the b-word" which is revealed to have been… well… what they are.

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Zyn 21 Jan 2023 08:02

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