Link: https://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/daviboi
(Do me a favor and stay on the tab with the tale name on it; lots of random unfinished ideas on the other tab!)
This is a short tale (about 1800 words) that's meant to be an accompaniment to SCP-7797, another SCP I posted. I was told some people wanted to see some more of the story behind this SCP, and this was more or less an introduction to a potential short series of tales about the characters and universe of SCP-7797.
Looking for:
-Ways to have a more interesting hook for the story, as this tale is meant to mostly be a pull-in for the audience.
-Any problems or inconsistencies with the characterization or plot.
-Ideas for where to take this tale are always appreciated, since even I don't know what I want to do with this.
-Most importantly, grammatical, punctual, and spelling errors.
Thanks for the help!
