My first draft of an SCP for this site, also my first time doing creative writing for judgement. Please grant me all the criticism you deem necessary to improve this draft. Thank you.
I moved and trimmed your thread summary, since it was taking up extra space in the main forum screen. Try to keep thread descriptions (the text in the little box under the thread title) and titles short so you don't crowd out other authors in the forum listing. ~Zyn
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