Another entry for Site-7! Thank you to whoever looked at this when I initially wrote it — that was over three months ago, so I can't quite remember everyone who took a look, but off the top of my head, Kirby, Harry, Ralliston, Jackal, Em, Pr0m, dxvi, Gecko, Rosy, and a few others — you know who you are. Three cheers for Ari and her robot arm.
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(account deleted)at this rate you're gonna become a tale author soon im so sorry
Ari :woozy_emoji: :woozy_emoji: :woozy_emoji: :woozy_emoji: :hot_face emoj-
1. Stop getting kids to be into joints, it is highly irresponsible. SMOKE THE REEFER MEET THE REAPER
2. Slightly awkward use of the word “veritable” in the fifth paragraph. It’s typically used to mean something is so like what it’s compared to that it has essentially become it, as opposed to just actually being the second thing in a real-world sense.
3. That is an… interesting choice of legacy character for the O5. It makes me think you either have consent or are being deliberately provocative.
4. tale gud have plus sign
Thank you! Re: 3 — I canonized O5-2 being David Rosen (in my little personal canon, anyway) in my first 001, which had the entire council made up of legacy characters. That was before all That Stuff happened, though. Since then, I kinda built Rosen into a character in my head that I really wanted to flesh out and explore which is why I didn't really want to change him into someone else, either. I hope that makes sense.
No, it does make sense, and he does fit well as someone who’d have eventually risen to be in charge of RAISA and then from there be on the O5 Council.
Plus, uh, I haven’t actually read your first 001 so there’s that 😅
Good shit. This felt very cinematic in the best way possible, supported by tight character beats and light action with a sprinkling of Foundation mythos to keep it all grounded. I loved seeing Site 7 portrayed as a real, livable facility, and the stinger at the end was killer. This sets up a very promising dynamic between Ari and Rosen—I'm intrigued to see where you take it from here.
(legacy character, techie who ran the the technical issues collab thing for a while (in universe). dunno what happened with him as a character but hey he's here now)
Dryocampa rubicunda, the rosy maple moth, is a small moth in the family Saturniidae.
Also O5-2 in Memento Mori, which is the portrayal of him here
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