thanks to plague, dysadron, greebo, lordxunu, tstaffor, prometheum, elenee, guare, rosy, and harry for looking this over in its various iterations. enjoy!
Though the O5s' behavior was probably a bit too lolFoundation-y for my liking, the final twist basically saved this for me. A reluctant, although amused, +1.
Same comments towards the article, but I'm gonna novote.
Very entertaining read, nice work!
By the way, in the description it says:
Secure Facility Site-011
Should that be Site-01?
Although I guessed pretty early on what the fly was, the continued escalating antics of the O5s made continuing reading a joy
Easily my favorite line is when one of the O5s demands staff “send up an errand boy with bug spray”
Hilarious +1
perhaps i went hoo hoo hoo and hee hee hee at this. perhaps i did a little bit of that. can you blame me?
What a clever little article. Couldn't guess the ending until it was right in front of my eyes, very good shit Mr. J Dune.