An excellent example of 'WTF have I just read?'. In a good way, I hasten to add!
Fun facts:
- when I saw the picture/read the 'mask attached to his face' part, I immediately thought: 'Where is my Mommy?' (Doctor Who, series 1 episode 9, The Empty Child) ;>
- a few paragraphs later, I thought: 'is this an allegory for the cause of global warming?'
A few things that need to be clarified, IMO:
- when SCP-2328 was found, was he already packed up in suit and mask?
- is he really the son of Robert Vershinski? If he is, why is he described as a construct resembling a Caucasian male human? Also, why write with no known living relatives if Vershinski had a son?
I do believe SCP-2328 is not Vershinski's son, but… not clear enough. I think it would be good to mention somewhere, for instance, that the Foundation tried to get him out of his suit and had to give up, because he's not actually a man in a suit.
Still, all in all, a very good, original take on compulsive hoarding. Aaaaaand yes, upvote!
