SCP-7444 / Discussion

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Jack Waltz 29 May 2022 06:35

This draft has been sitting, unused, in my sandbox for a few months now, and after some cleanup and assurance from several people, I thought I'd just post it and see how it goes! Well, it didn't flop and I'm happy with it!

All the money in my bank account goes to Cyvstvi, Aftokrator, basirskipreader, Fishish, Felixou, Sirslash47, syuzhet, LightlessLantern, WizzBlizz, corax s does not match any existing user name and Neatpicky, borodrori and, SynthPanda_ for taking a peek at this!

The gold nuggets I have with me right now go to borodrori and Fishish for encouraging me to post this and Cyvstvi for giving me the banger prompt that inspired this article!

Thanks for reading!

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+1

borodrori 29 May 2022 06:55

I liked this one a lot; it was interesting the entire time and the concepts introduced are great.

+1

Starch Tuber 29 May 2022 11:13

The idea of a generic guy who casually kills god because he was just hungry is very funny and original. I wished the concept was explored more and was expecting a whole bigger story on how the Foundation fix this mess, but the article is fine as is it in its short and sweet form.

Plus One!

(account deleted) 31 May 2022 02:20

With how the joke is setup I'm more interested in the mystery of all the weird stuff that happened than laughing at the absurdy of the situation which doesn't help with how the ending is sort of a cliffhanger (from the way I see it).

-1

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Not actually that well aware.

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Bynosaurus 31 May 2022 20:40

I'm not sure if I am missing something here, but the ending really doesn't do it for me. I like the concept here of both the Regulator and the loss of coherency in natural law, but the end feels random for the sake of being random.

-1

ertaisfamiliar 05 Jun 2022 04:28

The reduction of coherency in natural law seems tied to both the (prior) existence of the Regulator and also the random dude, shooting a hole in the wall of the universe, etc. Besides, random people should be able to notice the weirdness in natural law by today's calendar date in any case… maybe the "real" story is a less weird version of what we just read, made weirder by the phenomenon?

Woah

Bynosaurus 06 Mar 2023 08:03

That actually flew right over my head haha. Looking back now with that in mind, definitely +1.

-1

LordBone 24 Jun 2022 15:51

The article itself is great but the log at the end felt like you had no idea of how to end it and threw a random guy in there to finish it off with no real thought to it. It just felt too random and jarring to give it anything other than a downvote.