Hello.
I'm the co-author of SCP-3606 and have finally written that tale I said I was gonna do.
As the Sandbox is currently locked to new users and I never made one back when 3606 was being produced, my sandbox is on the SMLT site instead. I have not done any CSS formatting yet, so if it's too difficult to read, let me know and I'll fix it real quick.
http://smlt.wikidot.com/ashbelero:incident-3606-ab
Synopsis: The article for 3606 says that 3606-A was once aware of 3606-B's physical existence… So what led to that being wiped from his memory? A story alternating between the POV of 3606-A and the psychologist assigned to his treatment.
Very MLM, but this should be interesting to read even if you're not into that.
Somewhat of a dark romance.
Primarily I need to know if it's clunky to read or too fast. I will likely add another part to the story if the ending feels too abrupt. Worried it's a bit too short.
UPDATE: I've gotten some great feedback on other platforms so I'm done here. Thanks, guys.