SCP-6394 / Discussion

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notoriouss 21 Apr 2022 03:40

Well, after nearly 5 years of on and off writing, I've finally uploaded my first SCP to the mainsite! I hope you enjoyed reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.

Thanks to GlassAutomaton and Mesearch for giving this great feedback, as well as all of the people who helped me out with technical difficulties along the way!

Here's some song lyrics with a fancy background so that I don't get crucified:

| UNDER ATTACK
| I'M "BEE"ING TAKEN
| ABOUT TO CRACK
| DEFENSES BREAKING
| AND NOBODY'S COME TO SAVE A HEART
| THERE'S NO RESCUING NOW 'CAUSE I'M FALLING APART

god this would be so much better if css wasn't complicated

Picture credit to Wikimedia Commons

Last edited on 21 Apr 2022 03:54 by notoriouss Show more

Dr Lyndon Sylph 21 Apr 2022 10:27

Sassy bees and the name Notorious Bee.I.G. Perfection.
Immediate +1.

Last edited on 21 Apr 2022 10:28 by Dr Lyndon Sylph Show more

I liked.

BlueHand 21 Apr 2022 21:56

"Tired of suicide-sex"

Yeah, that's an upvote.

Crow-Cat 27 Apr 2022 03:21

I feel like this article relies too much on bee puns and bee jokes in order to maintain reader enjoyment, and the story itself doesn't make a lot of sense.

+ Spoilers

You have this population of honey bees that are self-aware, create multimedia art, and can speak to each other telepathically along with an AIC that has defected from the Foundation. But there's no (implied or explicit) reason given as to why Benson defected. I understand its meant to be a joke (Barry B. Benson from Bee Movie) but there's no justification for Benson's switch in loyalties. Why does he have the ability to talk to the bees telepathically? If this is because there's a secondary anomaly that causes things semantically related to bees to become connected to the anomaly, then shouldn't Jacob Beere and the assigned MTF also become connected to it?

Overall, this is a downvote.
Additional thoughts:

• The "SCP-6394-B" designation is only used in the image caption.
• I really liked the interview; the bees fucking with the interviewer is pretty fun.

SCiPtember Day 04 - Apian (#7)

GreenGolem 04 Sep 2022 15:52

I liked this. It has some logical fallacies like crow-cat pointed out, but since I was too captivated by bee jokes the entire time to notice anything, I'm still counting this article as an upvote.

M E M E

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Sincerely, a person who is definitely not a rock in disguise.

apiphanee 23 May 2024 00:06

What if bands were bees?

Lots42 20 Mar 2025 02:25

Jacob Beere?