Y'know, you'd figure, when a concept gets its' greenlights, that the draft would be mentioned to the reviewers of said concept.
You know, to help track its development.
That said, I have no hard feelings. The nursery was a bit of a surprise, but still engaging enough to get me to the real clicking point, that singular moment where I realized I knew what I was reading.
And on top of that, the images & imagery were of the most top-shelf quality. Each step of the journey, I felt I was immersing deeper into the crimson abyss, soaking up the lore like an infovorous sponge.
And then we get to Ah'nut's confessions, which were everything I'd hoped the full story would be, capturing those senses of ancient whimsicality & Foundation-brand impatience that I very much enjoy seeing.
Overall, good story, good world-building, good dialogue; what isn't to like?
Take an upvote; you've earned it.
Just.. try to link your draft to your concept next time, yeah?
