Long Article, Heavy Work Needed, Themes of: Knowledge, Foundation Failures, Cults, Hidden Organizations
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GREENLIGHTS:https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/forum/t-14458879/seeking-greenlights-friends-against-misinformation
LINK: http://scp-sandbox-3.wikidot.com/netherin5 (under the Friends Against Misinformation Tab, of course)
SUMMARY: A D-Class is *infected" with an anomaly that gives them increased intelligence and luck. A hidden note on the possessions of the D Class point to a previously unnoticed organization called the Friends Against Misinformation. The organization seeks to use the now anomalous D-Class to acquire Foundation secrets, however small. After another D-Class is converted for testing, the original D-Class is killed. The D-Class revives, delivers an outwardly friendly message that's apparently directly from the organization before the zombie collapses. A field report reveals that the Friends Against Misinformation have low level anomalous secrets, plan to spread them, and seem to have some weakness to amnestics.
LOOKING FOR: As best I can tell, all of my presented writing is written technically well with a clinical tone. I am a technically competent writer, but themeing, dialogue, general storytelling, and especially the ending are all weak points I have not been able to improve with my skills. I apologize to anyone who wants to do a full crit of this, as it is a fairly long article that needs heavy work.
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