This SCP was mostly written by the awesome JakdragonX and was posted with slight variations/additions by me to prove to Jak that he should really believe in his own ability more.
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God damn foundation telling us what we can say and what words are cancelled it's pc culture gone mad.
I'm glad you put this up, it's a fun one
I lost it at "Hittile"
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Strider_Star
"Foundation weapon specialist J. A. Leigh-Tedd's arms were officially posted to the master list of employees and subsequently removed. Standard severance pay was administered to both arms for their service."
I'm glad that the Foundation knows to respect arms! They even treat small arms right!
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Ehhhh, I dunno. The concept is neat, but using the exact same pun at the beginning and the end just… Feels cheap? It doesn't feels right as an ending.
Past this, I think the first example is too obvious (missile/hittile) which makes the rest just feel like beating a dead horse cuz it's essentially the same pun ten more times.
So yeah, think it's a downvote.
I'm with you that once the joke is established, it kind of just wears out its welcome through repetition, though I think there are enough good gags (in particular, severance pay for the arms) to keep it well out of downvote range for me. Also, I think the repetition of miss/hit actually works as a closer, since it proves that the weird logic of the anomaly applies even when the thing being described doesn't literally correspond to hit/miss outcomes.
AHHHHHH PUNS, MY MORAL ENEMY
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