First of all: You convey the emotions of your characters perfectly.
The interviews with Maxwell, even tho they have flaws, really gripped my attention. You could feel the connection of the characters which is a great writing skill.
My problems with this entry is, that it is too repetitive at many points. The first two Interviews with Dr. Kent had imo. too much unnecessary plot exposition. Dr. Kent just felt like a plot device, with too much text and not like a character. Which is a shame because I almost dropped the read!
I would deslack mainly the first two interviews, the whole thing altogether a bit and compress the information in the chronological listing of events - a lot. Also the SCP repeats itself and his behaviour too many times, to the point that it becomes annoying sometimes.
I was to say -1 because of the repetitive nature of this entry, but the characterbuilding of SCP-6126 and the (beautifully written) attached tale lead me to say: no vote
I will instantly +1 if the already mentioned flaws (imo) are being reduced.
Great emotional writing style, too much exposition dump. Overall you are a great writer, keep it up pal. Cheers
