(EDIT: Okay, now this is embarrassing — I just confused you with DrGooday, who had filled in the prompt "Fights" a couple of slots up, and I thought they had filled in this prompt, too. Guess I should've actually checked first before rushing to comment. Sorry!)
This flows decently and is a pleasure to read.
My only issue is the very end — it ended very anticlimactically, and I couldn't quite get the meaning behind it. Specifically these two lines:
"Send text to Mr. Night, tell him that I secured the- shit"
His brain finally caught up to what his mouth just said. Then it exploded.
