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Part II of IV

Jacob Conwell 24 Nov 2021 00:10

And here we are with the middle part of the series. I hope you all enjoyed Dr. Vogel for his brief appearance, as he was particularly fun to write. I can promise you Part III and IV will also include a fair amount more magic as things amp up.

Special Thanks to the following for providing Critique:

GreenWolf - SCP-5529 (Bonus thank you, again, for use of their character Robin Thorne).
DrBleep - Where There is Desire There is Gonna be a Flame
Vivarium - SCP-5803
Anorrack - UIU File: 2003-112 (OPERATION: PANDORA)
A Random Day - Speed Demon Hub
tawny0
TyGently - IRIS FALL: Zrnyowycz Revisited WL

Part III will be released in a few days.

JC

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Ralliston 19 Mar 2022 17:27

Continuing to use flashbacks from Ross's time at ICSUT is an excellent tool for character work that I feel like otherwise couldn't have been done within the confines of the standard format, so massive props for doing that, really like them. Also that final scene is an excellent mystery build up.