Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

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Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Zyn 10 Oct 2021 04:46

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Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Zyn 10 Oct 2021 04:57

Special Containment Procedures: SCP-6086's Effect Is Irreversable With Our Current Technology But It Can Still Be Slowed Down To The Point That We Have The Technology To Reverse The Problem, Which Is The 5R's. Description: SCP-6086 Consists Of 8 Billion Entities And Will Be Growing More And More, It Is Expected When SCP-6086's Population Reaches 20 Billion, The Earth Will Run Out Of Oxygen And Become Uninhabitable, -16 and three staff votes.

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containment procedures: Scp-5345 is to be contained in a locker 3ft by 2ft in diameter. if any staff is to read Scp-5345 they are to be switched out with another staff member. no one is to read scp-5345 out loud. description: Scp-5345 is a black book with hope written in all caps. any further description is denied. object was found in ███████ object seems to give a physic effect to its reader. mentally changing them, -15 and three staff votes.

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Researcher_IVance

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Hello Author,

A couple things. You forgot to include your rating module in the page, that needs to be fixed. Your formatting could use some help, check the page "How to Write an SCP." for more help. The idea is a little half baked, but i'd love to re read it if there was some improvement.

Good luck in the future!

fabledtiefling

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Author, I recommend that you spend more time reading the Writing Guides before attempting to write an SCP. I get the idea from both your article and your responses here that you just haven't spent enough time developing your writing skills or familiarizing yourself with the site's style yet.

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SCP-6486 is a 25-year-old human male of Irish-Italian descent that displays Class-II telekinetic and telepathic abilities. SCP-6486 initiates its abilities by covering its mouth with one of its hands. SCP-6486 is then usually viewed speaking into its hand as a focal point. Though SCP-6486's jaw and vocal cords can be seen moving, no vocalizations are heard when its mouth is covered by its hand. Once SCP-6486 has finished speaking, its abilities will activate, -14 and three staff votes.

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SCP-6395 is a tree of an undetermined species in a cavern underground. It appears to be at minimum 3000 years old and has black leaves and blue bark. It has demonstrated multiple anomalous properties.
The location of SCP-6395 changes no more than once a month and can be anywhere on Earth, although it usually appears in remote areas. SCP-6395 was first discovered near the small town of ██████ in the Central Australian desert, -13 and three staff votes.

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Researcher_IVance

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I’m not a big fan of this one to be honest. For one, what is so important about this SCP that whispering needs to be reported directly to the O5? As well as SPaG issues, and some confusing areas, I believe this article needs more work before resubmission.

Good luck in the future.

-Researcher Vance

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SCP-6282 refers to the anomalous nature of the rapid expansion of the universe, a phenomenon known popularly as Dark Energy. It is public knowledge that this rate of expansion of the fabric of space-time, described by the Hubble–Lemaître law, is increasing. Contrary to public knowledge, it is, in fact, an imminent threat to the universe, -13 and three staff votes.

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OzzyLizard

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I really think that in universe, this would be an SCP. I like that someone has made a skip based on dark matter, it’s a real life example of what would be considered an anomaly. Unfortunately, things are written on the SCP Wiki to be entertaining, and while I do enjoy the thought that something we have in real life that’s contained by the Foundation, most people won’t find this interesting.

I’m gonna make some quick suggestions:
. Add a narrative. Anything. To be honest, there doesn’t need to be a proper story, just something happening besides a description.
. If this was me: When thinking on how to improve this, the first thing that popped into my mind was that there’s some giant entity that holds galaxies and the Universe together, therefore preventing the Big Rip (I can tell you know your stuff here, so I’m assuming you know what that is). Maybe this thing is slowly dying, therefore creating an issue that needs to be solved and making this interesting, as oppose to simply describing dark matter on a creative writing site.

Feel free to ask for any more advice! :)

(Oh and also you might want to briefly describe what red shift is in a footnote somewhere because most people won’t know what it is or why it relates to the Universe’s expansion)

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SCP 6587 appears to be a white humanoid 12 year old girl that is 5.6 feet tall. She wears normal everyday clothes, when asked what she wants with containment she put normal clothes as priority number one (Reasons for this are still unknown). When having a normal scan it showed that she had no nerves, bones, or even blood in her legs and arms, -12 and three staff votes.

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Researcher_IVance

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For one, you didn’t add the rating module.

SPaG errors everywhere. Formatting issues. Take it back to the drawing board.

TheTexanKaiser

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The problems with this article are numerous but the ones that stood out to me immediately where lack of clinical tone, spelling errors, and the feeling that this idea was not fully developed. Those are just my thoughts though take them or leave them.

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SCP-6057 Is A 2 Kilometer Huge Humanoid Figure With 78 Eyes. SCP-6057 Is Guarded By 100 Personnel From Alpha-1 Designated "Red Right Hand" And Nu-7 Designated "Hammer Down" ((Addendums are optional, but can really add a lot to an SCP. Usually, people write recovery logs, interview logs, or test/observation/termination logs in the addendums. These addendums are typically formatted as "Addendum XXXX-1" or "Addendum XXXX-A" or something along those lines, -12 and three staff votes.

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SCP-6036 is a collection of five ornate cylinder music boxes (SCP-6036-A through SCP-6036-E) that when activated play a random song, with each box playing a different genre of music. Though the cylinders within these boxes have never been switched out or changed in any way, no one song has been repeated more than twice, -11 and three staff votes.

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Researcher_IVance

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Author, you forgot to include your rating module in the page. Please fix that.

Aside from that, the article is okay, but with a few SPaG errors, and some weird wording, I think it could use some work before resubmission.

Good luck in the future.

-Researcher Vance

Last edited on 10 Oct 2021 07:01 by Zyn Show more

Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Jacob Conwell 10 Oct 2021 17:58

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SCP-6980 marked for self-deletion. Limeyy witnessing.

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SCP-6029 marked for self-deletion. Limeyy witnessing.

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SCP-5287 deleted per author request via PM. Limeyy witnessing.

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SCP-6085-DNGO Is A Quad Legged Entity With Jet Black Color. SCP-6085-DNGO Is A 1 Kilometer Tall Entity That Resembles An Abnormal Shaped Dog Without Ears, Face, And Tail. SCP-6085-DNGO Has A Drop-Like Head With Tentacles Grabbing Any Living Being.

Deleted at -20 and three votes.

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SCP- 6220, is a light skinned, humanoid entity that wears a white blouse and a white petticoat with a red old bowtie attached on her hair and her overall appearance is of a teenager no more than 13 years old. She is fairly intelligent, and shows signs of being capable of speaking in a complex way.

Deleted at -13 and three votes.

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SCP-6058 Is An Area That Creates Giant Entities That Is Hostile.

Deleted at -15 and three votes.

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SCP-6041 is a white large Gallus gallus domesticus, a leghorn chicken with a feather tail that is much different than the rest of its body, with red, yellow, and green feathers.

Deleted at -12 and three votes.

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Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Naepic 12 Oct 2021 01:05

SCP-6086 summarily deleted for being blank by author, with aismallard witnessing.

Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Jacob Conwell 12 Oct 2021 03:45

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SCP-6940 marked for self-deletion. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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SCP-6121 marked for self-deletion. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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SCP-6121 marked for self-deletion. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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Dr. Kaldahl's Artworks and Designs marked for self-deletion. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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SCP-5507 marked for self-deletion. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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SCP-6107 was summarily deleted for being a blank page. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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SCP-6986 marked for self-deletion. Deadly Bread witnessing.

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H O P E

the following is an incident involving scp-5345

5 figures raided the facility of site-██. they were described as wearing full black suits wearing backpacks with a masks with no eyes or mouth with collars. armed guards were stationed at the elevator. when elevator opened the figures knocked out 5 of them the last guard known as Cole Willingham fired at them . one of the figures walked up ignoring any attempt of harm and said "easy, easy were not here to harm anyone don't waste your energy on us".

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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Scp-5345 is a black book with hope written in all caps. any further description is denied. object was found in ███████

Deleted at -18 and three votes.

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Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Zyn 12 Oct 2021 06:22

Of Write or Talk bout SCP-6052 Brings Mr Bad Grammer, and Least Best Spell, Of Be Talk Mean Least Best Grammar Til U No Talk, If Draw Da Letters Bout SCP-6052 Grammar Becomes Least Best. one TiMe someBuddy say Most Goodest Gramir Bout It Sumhow and Poopied his Pants and Drowned poopie. sCP-6052 give bad grammar, Scp-6052 Nevers Make Grammar Most Bestest, -16 and three staff votes.

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AvocadoMilk

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This concepts been done before with 3442 and there's no narrative or meat to the article. I suggest you read some guides like the "How to write an SCP" or "Your Journey" (Couldn't find a link)

https://scp-wiki.wikidot.com/how-to-write-an-scp

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Power (SCP-106), I Wake Up.. I Feel The Power.. I Sense The Young People.. I Walk Out Of My Containment, and I See My First Victim.. They Are Not Expecting Me, I Come Out Through The Floor, and Grab Their Leg! I Pull Them Into My Pocket Dimension Slowly, I Can Hear The Screams, It’s Like Hell For Them, I Then See Another Victim, They Run Into A Room With A Label Reading “SCP-173” On It, I Am About To Go Through, But I Hear Crunch. My Next Victim Is Perfect, 20, Male, Young… Very Young.. I Pull Them In, They Think They Can Stop Me, They Cannot, I Will Always Catch Up, But I Hear Something. A Young Man Screaming For Help. It Sounds Like His Femur Broke. I Go To Where He Is, My Containment, and I Torture Him, then Go Back To Sleep, -15 and three staff votes.

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SCP-6036, N̵͍̓Ù̴͜L̴͈̋L̵̻͂ ̵̣̌N̷̦͘Ů̵̦L̷̯̇L̴̙̒ ̸̜̂Ǹ̸̖Ȕ̴̡L̴͚̅L̶͙̈́ ̸̖̽Ǹ̴͜Ụ̵͠L̴̗͝L̴̜͊
N̵͍̓Ù̴͜L̴͈̋L̵̻͂ ̵̣̌N̷̦͘Ů̵̦L̷̯̇L̴̙̒ ̸̜̂Ǹ̸̖Ȕ̴̡L̴͚̅L̶͙̈́ ̸̖̽N̵͍̓Ù̴͜L̴͈̋L̵̻͂ ̵̣̌N̷̦͘Ů̵̦L̷̯̇L̴̙̒ ̸̜̂Ǹ̸̖Ȕ̴̡L̴͚̅L̶͙̈́ ̸̖̽Ǹ̴͜Ụ̵͠L̴̗͝L̴̜͊
N̵͍̓Ù̴͜L̴͈̋L̵̻͂ ̵̣̌N̷̦͘Ů̵̦L̷̯̇L̴̙̒ ̸̜̂, SCP-6036 Deletes All Information. It Can Be Remembered But Once You Speak It Will Either Be "SCP-6036" Or "INFORMATION IS BAD", -11 and three staff votes.

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DrKaldahl

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Please read guides and seek critique before posting.

winkwonkboi

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So the anomaly is able to delete all information regarding itself? How and why is that so? Again, author, with other coldposts of yours, this idea feels half-baked. There’s no context as to why the scip does what it does.

As DrKaldahl said, please head over to the forums and seek for criticism before posting next time.

Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

aismallard 13 Oct 2021 00:03

/join-my-channel deleted for being spam / a troll page, with DrEverettMann witnessing.

Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Jacob Conwell 13 Oct 2021 02:04

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SCP-5428 marked for self-deletion. Hexick witnessing.

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Fishish's Wares marked for self-deletion. Hexick witnessing.

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SCP -6733 is Large red Metallic cage roughly 5m x 5m x 10m with unknown origin and is not considered to be sapient. Any living organism within 15 Meters of SCP -6733 will feel a heavy urge to enter SCP -6733. This ‘urge’ is unable to be stopped and the affected persons will begin to walk toward the current location of SCP -6733 then enter the Item. upon entering SCP -6733 for more than 5 seconds will lead to the person's vital organs implode and be forcly pushed out of SCP -6733.

Deleted at -20 and three votes.

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SCP-6037 is a humanoid entity, roughly 1.8 metres in height, though this varies from instances. Any human coming within visual sight of SCP-6037 instances are unable to see the difference between a normal human and the anomaly until the entity speaks to the subject. Any subject spoken to by the anomaly sympathises with it, often resulting in transforming into the anomaly itself.

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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Scp-6977 is a leather journal being 0.15 meters tall and 0.12 meters long. The journal contains 36 pages that are filled with writing and 14 pages that are empty. The journal has an iron lock installed on it by the scp foundation. The journal tempts people to open its pages and read the contents of its pages. When someone opens up the journal, an item or creature from the journal's contents may come to life. Some of the journal’s pages are stained with blood, while some of the pages are ripped. Scp-6977 came into the foundation's hands by appearing out of a portal in ██████. It is unknown why the portal appeared there, or if the book itself made the portal or someone on the other side. The contents of this scp have been translated to put into this file.

Deleted at -16 and three votes.

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SCP-6038, The Living crayon, is a Homo Sapien, but they are shaped like a crayon and are a crayon. This SCP is 10”2, making it prone to crash into someone.

Deleted at -23 and three votes.

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SCP-6985-1-4 are bipedal humanoids ranging from 5’2 up to 7’3 in height. All instances of SCP-6985 are wrapped in a duct tape like substance which has proven to be impossible to pull off. SCP-6985 1-4s arms are longer or shorter depending on instance than regular human limbs. SCP-6985-1-4 have shown to have the reading capabilities of an average 30 year old human adult.

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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COLESTYLE CSS

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Zyn 13 Oct 2021 05:33

SCP-6331-A refers to a live streamed death game that can only be found on unrecognizable channels, meaning anyone or anything with access to TV Channels can view SCP-6331-A. No one has been found to be behind the death game however there should be no attempt to investigate a mastermind. During the live stream, the participants are forced to go through a random assortment of games, these games will be referred to as SCP-6331-B, -C, etc. Games are only repeated if one group of participants never experienced it, -18 and three staff votes.

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[A old mirror with a golden frame that has the ability to control any reflective objects that is within its view any thing it controls for more then 24 hours becomes a puppet that’s control can’t be broken if it controls a human that human becomes
Stronger and faster and virtually unkillable
[Any human/humanoid controlled for more then 24 hours is referred to SCP-6925-2 and always attempts to escape any place they are held to join a cult called children of the ███ comprised of many SCP-6925-2], -17 and three staff votes.

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fabledtiefling

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• There's a ton of formatting, spelling, and grammar issues present here.
• At the core, this is "thing that makes you fight good" with no real narrative to support it, and what narrative is here is clunky and really basic. It's just not appealing or interesting.
• I really recommend you head over to the forums to get feedback on your idea before writing and posting. Start with the Ideas Forum, and be sure to read the forum guidelines!

Leveritas

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Hey it’s me the creator of this post if you have suggestions please tell me

By submitting your work onto the mainsite, you are asking for summary judgement of a completed work. The correct procedure should be known to you, since it's in the required reading. Not only that, before posting to the mainsite, the page asks if you have received feedback a second time. Readers are not obligated to explain their vote if you choose to ignore that.

Members are encouraged to create thread for their SCP idea and ask for feedback in the Ideas Critique Forum to get it greenlit. After you get two greenlights, you can ask for feedback on your draft in the Draft Critique Forum. Alternatively, you can ask for feedback in our IRC Chat.

Writing standards in terms of formatting and narrative are high on the SCP wiki. We are more than willing to help you get off the ground, but you have to help yourself as well.

If you have any questions about this, don't hesitate to PM me or another member of staff.

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SCP-6121 is a seemingly normal clock. It is currently contained at Site-19 and is still undergoing testing to the extent of its anomalous capabilities. SCP-6121 was found in █/█/2017 (Seek addendum 1). When an arrow is spun (clockwise) it will show the future of the person that spins the arrows, e.g. if the hour hand is moved ten hours forward and the minute hand is spun ten minutes forward, it will show their future ten hours and ten minutes later, -13 and three staff votes.

Re: Deletions 75: There is nothing like looking, if you want to find something.

Jacob Conwell 14 Oct 2021 04:40

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SCP-6937 marked for self-deletion. Limeyy witnessing.

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File 682-ATLAS marked for self-deletion. Limeyy witnessing.

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SCP-6645 marked for self-deletion. Limeyy witnessing.

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Maxwell's Magnificent Art Crapfest marked for self-deletion. Limeyy witnessing.

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SCP-6053 is a Vintage 1942 Chess set constructed entirely from Aluminum. SCP-6053 is not sapient based on reports of past tests with D-Class Personnel. In any case, SCP-6053 being interacted with by 2 living creatures at any given time will result in the respective persons to play SCP-6053 until the 2 persons die from exhaustion.

Deleted at -15 and three votes.

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Scp 6052 is a weapon that somewhat resembles a sword on one side and a club on the other with a strong resemblance so some weapons seen in 14th century England. it is 1.12 meters long and is made up of what seems to be an unknown substance with the closest description being an almost black molten rock like material the weapon itself seems to have a constant red glow though it is not certain what the glow appears to be coming from (weather it be scp 6052 itself or a specific part of it), however the sword does have the property to attract nearby people (usually people that have a lower IQ) towards it in the hopes of getting them to pick up scp 6052 and become affected by it.

Deleted at -16 and three votes.

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SCP-6959-1 is an undetermined size of Arthroplura, SCP-6959-1 is, however, sentient and can say simple words like 'Hello' and 'good evening, while terrifying and huge, they also can alter their size.

Deleted at -13 and three votes.

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It is a tall figure made out of black fabric. It has a white and dirty mask and a black white striped on at all times. Anyone who says the words will be "chased" down by 6112, once 6112 finds the person who said it, it will start to make food from anything it can find. Such as dirt, trash, and more. After everything, the food will look natural and taste natural.

Deleted at -20 and three votes.

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SCP-6135 is a pink blob of an unidentified substance that every 14 minutes will release a worm with 5 legs that will eat any living thing above the weight of 9.8 pounds. These dangerous worms have been named SCP-6135-1. After an instance of SCP-6135-1 is done feeding on its prey SCP-6135-1 will return back to the blob. However if an instance of SCP-6135-1 does not get any prey to feed on within 19 minutes of being released from the blob the instance of SCP-6135-1 will send a cognitohazardous wave, and this wave does not stop moving until it reaches any living thing above the weight of 9.8 pounds. Then the victim will try to get to the instance of SCP-6135-1, stopping at nothing to get to the instance of SCP-6135-1.

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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I Saw It's Eyes

It was a cold night, the pale snow drifting on the roofs of homes. Green was driving through going to a certain pub "The Black Dog", the car stopped as Green got out, he entered inside the building.

"Whiskey, please."

Deleted at -12 and three votes.

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SCP-6121

It is a picture with a blue moth that has cartoonish arms and legs. Anyone who sees it can gain a disease that rapidly grows or die in a matter of seconds. Any attempts to destroy it have resulted in personnel dying of cancer, a deadly tumor, and various more.

Deleted at -13 and three votes.

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scp-5345 is a caucasion male that commonly wears a jesters outfit with a purple and pink color pallet with gold bells on his shoes, the only occasions he will be wearing different clothing are during comedic circumstances and during certain months.

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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SCP-6876

my name is jeff so upvote me or say goodbye

Deleted at -21 and three votes.

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SCP-6969-J is a virtual entity that only manifests on dedicated servers hosted under a private master server for a modified client of the game Modern Warfare 2, named alterIWnet. There have been no other anomalous occurrences on the alterIWnet network other than SCP-6969-J. AlterIWnet was developed by a programmer known as jerbob92 as an alternative to official publisher hosted servers in 2009. It allowed players using pirated and modified versions of the game client to connect to the alterIWnet master server and play multiplayer games on community-hosted, dedicated servers.

Deleted at -14 and three votes.

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SCP-343 encounter with The Administrator

This incident was found documented in a notebook located within SCP-343s room by an unnamed Foundation researcher whilst on a recreational visit to SCP-343. The researcher was always intrigued by the creations of SCP-343. He asked if he had permission to read what the notebook contained. SCP-343 was noticeably agitated by the sight of the notebook, and remarked that it is nothing more than simple fiction that another visitor from Foundation personnel had created. He later requested that the researcher took the item as a gift. It describes an interaction between a mysterious entity only named as "The Administrator" and SCP-343.

Deleted at -16 and three votes.

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