hey! you might remember this article from awhile back. it didn't do all that well, so i've rewritten it, and i think it's a lot better now.
big thanks to greebo, lamentte, plague, and harry for reading this. <3
enjoy!
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How do you like them eggs dem bones
because I like them
At first, when I read the description, I thought the anomaly was going to be that something about the luchador costume makes you perceive it as an actual skeleton. That would have been very funny.
Nevertheless, what I actually got was funny, heartbreaking, and uplifting as hell. I love stories about anomalies being brave enough to live their own lives against all odds.
+1
Mr. Bones wild ride left me bittersweet. Easy +1.
SCP65345 takes a firearm.
Should be SCP-6345.
I'm doing this for me! f you think I've gone soft, you better think again.
F should be 'if'.
A squad of 7 STF guards
I'm assuming this means Securitt Task Force, but it could also be MTF.
This was good one, a really wholesome story about a father doing the best he could to redeem himself for his daughter. I really like how the redemption seems to be working at first but then Ernesto reverts back to his previous behavior, like how most people would do in a similar situation. Well done, easy +1
~ M.D.R.
It's moments like this that I wish that I could upvote comments.
Raccoon Noise
I enjoyed this read here. I was writing a draft for a humanoid who suffered from drug addiction, and I think your take on it was good. You really showcased how much of an asshole users can be, whether they mean to be or not.
I also enjoyed how he tried to win back his family, albeit in a screwed up way. It made the eventual redemption that much sweeter, and I wanted to root for him.
Good job.
There is such a legitimately delightful mix of fairly standard Dune "Weird Guy" with a legitimately compelling character with some sincere depth beyond the funny things he says (not to imply your characters are shallow, far from it!) Honestly this is my favorite work of yours because all those little details and pieces come together in such a satisfying way, and it has an ending that really sticks with you. A wonderful twist on the "do good deeds to get into Heaven" trope for sure.
The actual translation is "[the] bone grinder". I really don't get why the abovementioned translation.
its in purpose
— Roundabout.
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