Written in one sitting. Hope you all enjoy!
i love dialogue-only tales, and this was no exception. love the dry humour - the voices came out really well, easy to differentiate despite the lack of dialogue stuff. also ofc just funny - nice work, ooga
Thanks! Being able to tell the characters apart was the main thing I was worried about, so I'm glad it worked out well.
This is surprisingly good, considering you did this in one sitting.
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it! It's quite experimental for me in that regard.
I like this tale better than the actual anomaly. Really captures the feel of such an absurdly-comedic-but-still-very-messed-up situation.
High praise! And yeah, I always try and inject comedy into the scariness/danger of the SCP world. It works pretty well, usually.
A really great little piece that totally delivers on what's it's going for and doesn't overstay its welcome!
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i was worried they were gonna die, but the rhythm doesnt lie :)
thoroughly enjoyed plussun
Didn't really do it for me, sadly. Not sure what it was. It has everything I love, lolfoundation and absurdity, yet I just felt…nothing reading it. Not even a chuckle, and making me laugh is as easy as just staring into my eyes and saying, "pie."
Shrugs
No-vote.
Hey, no worries. I will say that it wasn't intended to be lolfoundation, although it is intended to be funny.
Got an unexpected laugh a few times. Unconventional but I think it works for the subject matter. A great example of how less can be more, your mind really does just fill in the blanks. Easy +1.