Wow. This was fun! The meme was HARAMBE!
Thank you to LonLangLin for crit! (let me know if i missed someone)
And thank you so much to JakdragonX, for helping me with the offsets. It means so much to me!
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Noting for posterity that the co-author has requested that I correct the ListPages and offsets. This has been done
fish^12 (14?) and basir were my critters for this, sorry for taking so long to credit you two
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SCPs these days are getting pretty long… I can read them only when I'm really concentrated. Otherwise, nice!
Hmmmm, I'm conflicted. I feel like the 'final offset' (To not spoil the reveal here) feels too unnecessary, like it's the punchline on a story that didn't need the punchline; in turn, that makes the second offset unneeded as well. Maybe it's because I don't particularly care about the meme itself, but to me, the article is at its highest at the end of the first offset, and maybe with the use of about half of the second. This means that in turn, everything else just adds very little.
Of course, what's here still is very interesting. I really like this 'slowly crumbling' feel of the piece, and it fits the Rat's Nest canon really well. Again, it had a very strong feel on the first offset, but the latter parts were not as interesting, in turn selling a fairly disappointing ending, if it can veen be called that, of course; it feels like it didn't know how to end and just decided to do so.
Hmmm… Think I'll downvote, sorry. There's a good piece here, but there's also a lot that's bringing it down.
I'm glad you enjoyed the first parts of the article. I agree with my co-author that you made some great points. We were a bit short on time when it came to the ending, cause we got to it 3 or so hours before the deadline for the contest. I'd love to revisit and redo the latter offsets of this article with my co-author in the future when I have the time. Thanks again for the feedback!
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The concept that something (let it be the Foundation, another SCP or another GoI) caused the anomalous activity to increase is not new and in my honest opinion pretty overused.
However, due to the many „new“ SCP forms and files, this one is quite more interesting than the others.
Overall, too well-known concept, but excellent execution.
+1
Thanks! And yeah I was a bit concerned about that. The main thing I worried about when Cole and I were writing it was making sure it didn't overlap too much with Kalinin's Proposal and other stuff similar to it
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Looks like I was wrong when I doubted that any quality content could come from meme con. This was fantastic.
Alright that caught me off guard, that's an upvote from me. I was genuinely surprised by it.
+1
Is there any reason why this isn't in the Rat's Nest hub?
One of the few guidelines for the canon is that the GOC killing God is the reason why everything is going to shit. Saying that Harambe is the cause very much contravenes that.
basically what crow cat said, harambe was able to negate some of the worse effects of the rat nest-ing and his death just caused all that rat nest-ery to happen at once, making the whole situation even worse.
6170 isn't on the hub mostly cause cole and i completely forgot to do it
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