SCP-6777 / Discussion

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Credits

Karathh 09 Jul 2021 08:56

SCP-6777 - Unreal

グルメなばくのお腹がなる

(The hungry baku rumbles its tummy)

食べても食べても飽き足りないな

(No matter how much it eats, it can't get enough)

ばく(Baku) - Madobe Rika

Entry for the MEMECON.
Addendum 3: SCP-6777's fave is Matikanetannhauser from Uma Musume.
Special thanks to:
stephlynch for giving us the idea of the latter part.

ValidClay, ponhiro, Westrin, Fireknight for the feedback.

Gonzaburo and Masso for the design of Bakuu.

Madobe Rika and Amanita Pantherina for the inspiration.

And most of all, ratking666 for helping me writing this.

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Images

IchifujiBakuuChannel

Source: (Original)
License: CC BY-SA 3.0

Title: IchifujiBakuuChannel
Creator: Karathh
Vintage: 2021

IchifujiBakuuStreaming_R

Source: (Original)
License: CC BY-SA 3.0

Title: IchifujiBakuuStreaming_R
Creator: Karathh
Vintage: 2021

IchifujiBakuusNightmare

Source: (Original)
License: CC BY-SA 3.0

Title: IchifujiBakuusNightmare
Creator: Karathh, pastarasta1 does not match any existing user name
Vintage: 2021

Last edited on 19 Jul 2023 12:22 by Karathh Show more

+1

Sinagsikap 09 Jul 2021 11:53

I remember seeing this in the draft forums, got stoked about v-tubers, and enjoyed it. As far as things go, this is a v-tuber whose real persona is just fantastical, but otherwise is rather wholesome. Poor thing.

Anyways, updoot!

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The pen is the killer of fear.

+1

(account deleted) 09 Jul 2021 12:54

Saw this in the draft forums, finally came out ;P

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—j.w

Dream eater

Maxyfran73 09 Jul 2021 15:12

Hmmm. How not to be unbiased because I like V-tubers. Difficult decisions…

Ok, but for real, this is a fine piece. While I feel it cuts short, it also doesn't overstays its welcome, and as a core concept, it's really good. If there is one point I'd correct, is that in the interview, a lot of different spellings for the Baku's name are used. I would standardize one of the names for it.

Overall, I like it! All hail our new Baku queen. +1

Phantom8 09 Jul 2021 15:30

Overall, I enjoyed this concept quite a bit. It presents a unique idea and expands on it. The only 2 issues I have for now are: 1) Grammar. I noticed a few SPaG errors with the dialogue and prose, but it's nothing an lbl can't fix.

And 2) I would have liked to see the concept expanded even more than it already was, you introduce a whole bunch of interesting properties and backstory but don't really do anything with them apart from briefly mentioning them. I would have liked to see a conclusion where either the entity is blocked from manifesting or manages to achieve it, and see how it reacts in those situations. Or expand on the backstory to better understand what's going on.

Overall, I think it's a neat idea, however it could use a bit more work in my opinion. Novote for now.

Last edited on 09 Jul 2021 15:30 by Phantom8 Show more

andromedaz 09 Jul 2021 16:36

Overall, I think this is a solid concept. While I will +1 it, I did get frustrated with the use of redaction over the dates. I feel like dates give the reader a better timeline within the SCP's storytelling.

+1

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where we landing? not tilted! ッ

Rigen 09 Jul 2021 22:08

This article could benefit from a couple more pass on the spelling and grammar, primarily on the dialogues.

TheFacelessOne 13 Jul 2021 14:08

Unless it is a deliberate choice to make dialogues look like they've been google translated, I feel the article could gain a lot from having its dialogues rewritten. Being bilingual is hard, but it's better to nail the dialogue writing now than later.

The idea itself is a fairly simple, if not obvious one, so I feel like one of the main ways to make this article pop could be by expanding on the character of Bakuu, making her more thought through and polished. Overall, I await any potential further revisions, hopefully the article will benefit from

Karathh 14 Jul 2021 01:46

Thank you for that.
I'll be working on the rewrite soon.

Please stand by.

TheWanderer0th 26 Jul 2021 02:19

as a simp, this will be my most favorite scp. It's good, scary and a vtuber
+1

AngryAccordions 27 Oct 2021 18:15

And now there's patty too. Foundation should stop screwing with cicada+christian=cicadians, lest they get pissy. I wonder how this and the broken veil interacts.

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