Unexpected Light / Discussion

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Felixou 17 Jun 2021 23:56

Hey! Here is my first tale and I hope you will enjoy reading it!
This Idea took me a while to actually writing it. But in the end, I had fun writing it!
I don't have really anything else to say :P

Many thanks to the following critters: DodoDevil, quickestsilver, UnnaHuz DrDromeus Fishish. If you critted me and I didn't mention you, please hit me up.

And thanks to you, reader, for being here!

Edit: WOW! Thanks to the amazing UnnaHuz this article got a Chinese translation that you can all check out HERE!

Edit X2: And now it gots his own meme created by the Reddit user nabtabwastaken! Damn, it's enough to make a newbie author cry.

+ MEME HERE (spoil tho)

Original reddit post HERE

Edit X3: Hoooo boy, one of my favorites SCP video content, SCP Illustrated (you should check out the channel (it’s good trust me)) just made a video about this tale. That’s it, I’m crying now.

You can all check the video HERE

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Last edited on 05 Dec 2022 23:16 by Felixou Show more

DrWhiteFox 18 Jun 2021 06:46

Mhhh. I don’t know if i like it or not. I think the reasoning might the depiction of SCP-096.
It’s a tentative +1 for me

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Fox 🦊

UnnaHuz 23 Jun 2021 02:10

Just as what I mentioned in the crit, the story plot is fairly good, but the idea of SCP-096 plus daybreak is interesting enough. A tentative +1.

By the way, it is over +10 so why not add this tale to the daybreak hub?

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Yeah, if one feels the story would survive they will just append the link to the corresponding part of the hub page. I just helped you add it.

Last edited on 23 Jun 2021 15:07 by UnnaHuz Show more

Felixou 23 Jun 2021 02:14

I'm not sure how I add it to the hub, so I just edit the hub page?

Edit: thank you!

Last edited on 23 Jun 2021 16:09 by Felixou Show more

DREAlity 06 Jul 2021 23:40

what? i dont get it

The SCP-001 effect does not seem to result from exposure to ultraviolet rays, but rather light in the visual spectrum (~390 to 700 nm). The effect is similarly present in moonlight.

but you wrote:

He could go outside when it was night.

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RE Felixou :
Perfect!

Last edited on 07 Jul 2021 05:58 by DREAlity Show more

Felixou 07 Jul 2021 01:01

Oooooooops, sorry! Will correct it.

Edit: …Kinda corrected it?

The idea of going outside at night was an option, but he was still too scared.

I changed it so 096 thinks he can go outside, even though we know he would die.

Last edited on 07 Jul 2021 01:18 by Felixou Show more

LizardWizard 16 Jul 2021 20:39

I like this! However, I do take issue with the idea that 001-A could copy 096's voice. I always had read it as 001-A was still the people who had melted, not seperate copying beings. This is just a personal nitpick however. Nice tale!

oiger 29 Aug 2021 22:00

This was very well-written, felt like I was actually in it
+1

OzzyLizard 29 Sep 2021 14:17

Brilliant, makes me look upon 096 completely differently.

Enjoy a +1!

Emotion.

Adrian Adams 0 19 Nov 2021 20:25

First tale that has made me feel intense emotion. This is currently my favorite tale.
+1

iFlashboy 18 Jan 2022 01:46

My SCP boy deserved better, the moment he got a friend he dies, thats so sad. +1 for genuine emotion from me. Well done.

lsjtscjyy 31 May 2022 14:16

Classic……but still very touching +1

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