this is a coldpost, again
slot preference, in order: 6001, 6998, 6500, 6463, 6400.
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(account deleted)This article reminds me of a famous post in CN Branch，SCP-CN-463.
I really love this kind of way of writing, it just gives us an ending and let us imagine what had happened.
Personally, I’d like this article to be 6463.
只想快点remake，然然你带我走吧
I wanted to kill Dr. Gears's avatar in my 6K entry, but I'm afraid I won't be able to translate it into English within the deadline.
This article did. +1 :p
Sieg Zeon.
On one hand, the imagery here and the inclusion of Gears is quite beautiful. On the other, by the end of the piece, I'm left shrugging and asking myself "And…?"
I can see this article struck a chord with many readers, and I can see why. For me, however, you don't do enough with the concept to really solidify the article into more than a brief flash of imagery, as pretty as that imagery is.
No vote. What is here is quite neat, but I need more if I am going to offer the ol' +1.
Yeah, I agree with this. It looked from the outset like it was going to be one of those quiet, introspective pieces with a solid finish, but it wraps up too quickly to have gotten me invested in what it's trying to sell.
I read this first with no context, and I was interested. It's hard to say what it was exactly, that interested me. There's a lot of negative space here, but something about it tugged at a heartstring or two. So I decided to come back to it the next day and see whether that feeling had changed. Between then and now, I've seen your explanation for your thoughts behind this piece. I'm assuming you didn't mention them here for a reason. While what you said certainly gave me a new lens to view this piece through, I think I can safely say that I would have enjoyed what's here without it. I wish I could know more about what's going on, I wish I knew what significance the tree holds, and I wish I knew quite what it is about the imagery that makes it so arresting. While I have some grasping-at-straws ideas, none of them are strong enough for me to think it's what you were going for. But the point, I guess, is that I'm trying to appreciate what's here, I'm trying to come to terms with it. I like that.
This doesn't hit hard in the sense that I'm left with any strong feeling of peace, or of grief, or anything like that. There's an emptiness to it. That's what hits me.
Emptiness is one way to put it, definitely. Maybe there was a story to be told, beneath the gentle shades.
In the end, all that's known is that one man died beneath a tree, with no one to listen.
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