SCP-5749 / Discussion

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Rhineriver 19 May 2021 01:49

It won't let me edit the title so I guess it's just access denied for now

I hope you liked this article, which I came up with the idea for after waking up in the middle of the night.

A very special thanks to quickestsilver, Mew-ltiverse, and Mooagain for looking at and critiquing this article in chat.

The first image is a cropped version of this and the second is a cropped version of this.

The Internal Tribunal Department logo was created by Arbelict. The version I use in this article is slightly edited by me to make the text easier to read.

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Last edited on 19 May 2021 22:02 by Rhineriver Show more

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kingmeatballs 19 May 2021 06:23

I enjoyed reading this. The story was pretty good and kept me reading all the way through. The twist at the end was also executed well. Also I haven't seen an an article yet that showcases IDT, which defiantly brang something new to the table.

1+ from me

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Dr Itzhak 19 May 2021 07:17

I loved reading this, I just wanted to know how the Lobster Murderer would get persecuted. And that twist at the end just put a cherry on the cake! The "Oh shit" moment of the ITD it was gold!

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Microwaved Cheetos 19 May 2021 09:58

Foundation headlines: Lobster Murderer wrongfully executed! Cause? ANOTHER LOBSTER!

Microwaved Cheetos 19 May 2021 10:01

Just the weirdness at the beginning would've been enough to make this an interesting article, but that twist at the end really boost it to another level. Love to see more works using the IDT

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Blank-Minded 20 May 2021 07:59

Loved to read, but I'm bugged by the footnote at the prosecution of Mercury parts, which makes me feel like I'm being shouted of "There is a twist later on" every time I view the footnote, in turn, lessen the impact of the twists for me.

Maggywaggy 20 May 2021 19:23

It's great.

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Unique and slightly scary with the implied difficulties in securing both versions of the anomaly.

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HenryDude5 21 May 2021 00:51

Great story! I especially loved the sense of dread in the ITD documents. My only gripe with this article was the content warning for a death of an animal, which I found to be a little silly, other than that great article!

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safeandsound 21 May 2021 04:14

I really liked this one a lot! The fact that things kept getting weirder even after the original lobster was killed really hooked me in. The tribunal department documents were my favourite part.

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Thundercat3 27 May 2021 19:33

that twist…

Habdash 12 Aug 2021 01:22

God, I loved this even before the twist.
A hearty +1