Liked it overall, it's definitely a lot better than the first drafts and I appreciate that you took the feedback on character development to heart, in my opinion it helped you flesh out good characters.
I liked the story too, short and sweet exploration logs. In contrast with T Rutherford's crit I actually think the formatting on the logs was cool, I didn't have any troubl reading it (Maybe that's just me tho)
I think giving each member a personality and have them experience these fraternizing moments is a good way to make the characters more relatable and believable. I still think the whole death thing comes a little out of the blue but overall I feel it's atleast a decent change.
Overall good skip. Not much else to say. Good job.
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