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Raddagher 17 Apr 2021 16:37

"When someone leaves your life, those exits are not made equal. Some are beautiful and poetic and satisfying. Others are abrupt and unfair. But most are just unremarkable, unintentional, clumsy."
- Griffin McElroy

This article isn't ABOUT this exactly, but my friend's anniversary is in a few days, so April always gets me thinking about mortality and how we use the time we have with people we care about.

Thanks to T Rutherford, Ace_james, Mars, penguinpyro, Phantom9 and Mew from IRC for the crit!

EDIT: this has 300 now wow anyways I should probably link the song it's titled after, thank you for reading ;0;

Last edited on 21 Feb 2023 19:06 by Raddagher Show more

+1

Dr Itzhak 17 Apr 2021 17:30

Amazing article about a connection between an SCP and a foundation agent, great story telling and execution. Worth every moment!

+1

MuseofScience 17 Apr 2021 17:50

This one made me cry. I mean, cry a lot. It was so sad and warm (the friendship between dr Miller and Rori was great given their positions) and humane and very well written. Good, good, damn you and thank you for making me cry and feel +1

Btw, who is Sarah from the title? She doesn't appear anywhere in the article.

Raddagher 17 Apr 2021 18:26

the title is actually a song lyric, I'll let you find the song yourself ;)

EstrellaYoshte 17 Apr 2021 23:12

Absolutely gut-wrenching, thanks. This reminds me a bit of Captain Kirby's work.

Phantom8 17 Apr 2021 23:54

Great article with a lot of emotion into it, the ending really left me feeling sad. Which means you accomplished your mission.

Overall great skip, never got stale and kept my interest until the very end.

+1

Snailmug 17 Apr 2021 23:55

I need to go cry for a bit +1

Westrin 18 Apr 2021 03:42

Absolutely phenomenal

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Dr Brooks 18 Apr 2021 03:45

This is really good. I went through a whole rollercoaster of emotions while reading - the wholesomeness of their friendship, the hilarity of the french toast sticks, the sadness of unsaid words and an abrupt end.

+1

Last edited on 19 Apr 2021 11:08 by Dr Brooks Show more

Y'all see that ton of bricks?

Maggywaggy 20 Apr 2021 22:06

Cuz I could see it from a mile out.

Still slapped me right in the mouth though.

Good show +1

oof ow my feels

NickNirus 25 Apr 2021 12:37

that ending oof ouch

seriously, this is pretty incredible, +1

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