Yeahhh, sorry, not a fan. I have a couple problems here, of which most are structural but the structure itself kinda hurts the article imo. So, for starters, the first image is a tad too small I think, because I couldn't tell what it was trying to be until I began reading and once I understand what it was I still couldn't really see the island that well. It would work better as a bigger image.
Second, the title of this piece works really badly with your hidden addendum: You immediately know the twist reading the title; hiding the 'punchline' makes it fail cuz it's like "Wait, was I supposed to take this as a surprise or?…"
I feel like you put all the pieces down, build the puzzle in its entirety, then act as though the twist is that same puzzle we saw you build and… Yeah, it just doesn't feel right.
-1. Interesting concept for a comedic piece, but as it stands, it kinda shoots itself in the foot.
