Heh. Gamers, am I right?
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I would like to thank stoner99 for telling me that he laughed at this article, as well as giving me some clearer language to use.
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This is stupid as hell, but in the best possible absurdist kind of way. The chat logs were a nice touch, too - very accurate! +1 from me.
Although this was dumb and really short, honestly, I kind of enjoyed it! I wish there was a little more to the article, I feel like more could be done with this concept. However, what you have is pretty funny and enjoyable. +1 :)
I'm glad you think so lmao. It's great to hear that coming from you.
This made me laugh a lot. I don't play many online multiplayer games but I have friends that do and they sound exactly like that fish. It would be interesting to see how foundation researchers interact with the fish. Also is SCP-5809 able to use another device to play league of legends or is SCP-5809-1 special in some regard? Anyways it made me laugh so +1
Also, the theme adds to the humor a lot in my opinion.
Sorry I didn't know I could edit lol thanks Zyn.
Also, the theme adds to the humor a lot in my opinion.
totallynotenby, instead of replying to your own comments, please edit your previous post using the "edit" function under the "options" tab to the lower right of every comment. That helps prevent spam buildup.
It feels ridiculous to crit an article that, by it's nature, is ridiculous, but here I am.
There's several key elements you don't establish that could be remedied with throw-away lines. Does the goldfish's ability ONLY work on that particular dell laptop? Does it's behavior deviate in any way when separated from the laptop, or is it just a goldfish otherwise? If so, keeping it in a standard containment locker is kinda' cruel, and there's no mention of feeding the poor thing.
Also, saying it writes in "broken" english doesn't feel especially clinical. Unrefined or irregular, internet-slang-based or something similar would have worked.
Besides any of that, this is an adorable, funny little article that was fun to read. +1.
Thank you for the read, and outlining some of the pitfalls! It's really helpful to me.
I See where you want to go with that theme and the execution is okay. But i really doesnt work for me. because of its shortness and the two logs Just being in Game Chat, for me its just "Somebody Likes the Game and Made a Joke about the Community" into a skip. -1 from me
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