Everyday Life With An Extraterrestrial Girl / Discussion

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Einer von Rabe 23 Jan 2021 12:26

Original Post on DE:

I started this tale when I read Second Contact by Oboebandgeek99. It was also around this time that I started to really understand the theme of the Church of the Second Hytoth. It took me more than a year to finish the story, but I got a taste for writing weird slice-of-life stories in the meantime. :D

I hope you guys like this one. ^^

Note One: The title is a reference to the manga Monsutā Musume no Iru Nichijō, which translates as Everyday Life with Monster Girls. I know I'm not supposed to be proud of it but, sorry, I am.
I don't know how far this is a problem with CC, so I'll mention it.

Note Two: The saleswoman is a reference to one of my characters. Since the tag for this GOI, to which the woman belongs, does not exist on EN, here is a spoiler as to who it is: she is probably, but not definitely, Ms Mirabilis from the Wunderkabinett or an iteration of her. But I would actually like to leave it open.

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do_the_right_thing 26 Jan 2021 15:30

Very fable-like with the right touches of modernity. More people would probably read this if you used more traditional spacing but I personally like it the way it is.

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Einer von Rabe 26 Jan 2021 17:07

Thank you, the fact that you find it fable-like is high praise for me, as I wanted to achieve this tone. I don't quite understand the spacing part. But I am quite open to hearing your suggestion.

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do_the_right_thing 26 Jan 2021 17:14

I only meant that more ‘traditional’ paragraph spacing is something closer to convention, but by no means did I encourage you to pursue that lol space it where you feel is right. There is no right or wrong way.

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Einer von Rabe 26 Jan 2021 18:26

I think I understand what you mean. But I think here I can consider it artistic freedom, even though I see what you mean.
On top of that, my mother tongue is German, so maybe there is a little cultural difference involved. But this should not be an excuse not to think about whether I can make changes in the translation to adapt it to the audience.

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do_the_right_thing 28 Jan 2021 15:16

Exactly! When it comes to the integrity of art, the audience should adapt themselves to the work and not vice-versa.

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Crow-Cat 30 Jan 2022 19:00

Very cute slice-of-life tale. +1!

Einer von Rabe 31 Jan 2022 20:05

Thank you, I'm glad you like it. :D

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SnakeTransmutation 26 Feb 2022 04:39

Beautiful slice-of-alien-life story where I was (at same time) quite distressed by the Saleswoman! +1 any day of the week.

Einer von Rabe 27 Feb 2022 08:33

Thank you for your positive review. I actually tried to make the saleswoman a bit creepy, so I'm glad she did come across as scary. I had a lot of fun with the part where she unhooks the lock. :>

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Mal0gen 21 Nov 2022 18:43

This was really hooking. I like this tale a lot B)
The theme was oddly pleasant. I didn’t expect for orange to actually turn out okay for a website background…

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- Mal0gen, the skullgen in your phone.

Re: Random Page Button got me here

Einer von Rabe 22 Nov 2022 05:02

I appreciate that very much. ^^

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