Exierunt ut Vinceret / Discussion

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MalyceGraves 17 Jan 2021 02:05

And Act II of Memoria, Adytum marches nearer to a close. It's been a wild ride, and I am grateful to all of you that have followed along (or will follow along) so far.

Most of the Great Plan has gone off at this point. Just a few more things to see what all of this has been leading up to.

Many many thanks to my reviewers. You've helped make my shit readable, and I appreciate it from the bottom of my heart.

And, as always, I couldn't have done any of this without DrAkimoto. You're the best goddamn writing partner I could ever have hoped for. Thank you, brother.

Last edited on 17 Jan 2021 02:16 by MalyceGraves Show more

Grigori Karpin 17 Jan 2021 07:27

Excellent action piece, you’ve choreographed the fight very well and it was good to see a Klavigar personally take the offensive instead of planning from the shadows.

I like this aspect a lot because it speaks to Saarn’s character, especially the idea that she felt the need to step in herself and get her hands dirty to make sure the plan was a success.

Anyway, a joy to read as always. +1

Last edited on 21 Jan 2021 07:59 by Grigori Karpin Show more

(account deleted) 21 Jan 2021 07:18

"Sarah" XD

Grigori Karpin 21 Jan 2021 07:59

That'll teach me to type on my phone

Last edited on 21 Jan 2021 08:02 by Grigori Karpin Show more

Dr Moned 17 Jan 2021 18:01

Loving it. Great work as always!

Need more :p

Fernlom 17 Feb 2022 21:35

I refuse to believe DC al Fine was a karcist. and by that I mean I am so blown away by the creativity and originality of this! I would have never seen that coming, well done!

Oh no! :0

Shraga Tarshem 26 May 2022 09:06

I can't believe Dicie is dead! I really hoped to see more of her.