Calling it a "God of Peace" implies it's part of a pantheon. This somewhat contradicts with it being cast out by what I assume is the singular, biblical God.
I get where this comes from, however, in this particular story, what happened is that God created other various gods (those being from Greek, Egyptian mythology and etc) to keep order in the Universe. However, at a certain point (this being ages after SCP-XXXX's banishment), they were all essentially decommissioned, only leaving God as the remaining ruler (and yes, I'll try to explore this as much as I can in the narrative).
I think just creating an embedded article would serve this purpose more efficiently. Leaving some of your story or characterization out of your main article is generally not a good idea.
Noted, thank you (I would just need to learn how to do that though).
If it has a power as suited to solving conflicts as mentokinesis, why would it resort to murder? (This will probably be explained in the backstory, but I still wanted to raise the question.)
Exactly. Before reducing my idea to the 400 words limit (which I had no prior knowledge of before writing it), I actually explained in detail how this came to be (basically it was a quarrel that was simply out of his control, nothing could put an end to it. His abilities were rendered useless and the ones partaking in the quarrel involved him in it, putting him under a lot of mental stress).
How does it know that reading and training will help it regain its memories and powers if it lost all its memories? Also, why would God leave a way for it to regain its powers if it committed a crime as serious as murder and was cast out as punishment? Is it meant to be some kind of rehabilitation?
I feel like I left out some details on this point after reducing my idea.
Basically, his soul is essentially still the same as when he was banished, and the memories weren't completely stripped away from him, they were most likely sealed away. The rediscovery of his powers through reading came from his huge sense of Deja Vu and intuition, which led him to make conclusions of himself whilst training his spirit, trying to see if he could regain any of what he had lost (even if his mind was filled with doubts). Noted the rehabilitation part by the way, didn't really think of that.
A humanoid entity, especially one as powerful and historically violent as this one, would likely not be used to contain other anomalies.
Yep, thought people were gonna comment on that aspect, and I was actually thinking about it recently while trying to sleep. I decided to link this to his 3 document revisions, but in short, he would start by not telling the full details of his story, leaving aside and masquerading the most important details under a lie. + As stated, before being classified as Thaumiel (if I ultimately decide to go for that route), he would undergo intensive training and be escorted by MTFs.
Perhaps they could start out with their memories and violent tendencies, and slowly learn to understand their place and what it means to be human. Maybe you could include a researcher they become particularly close with and learn from.
This is actually a pretty good idea that didn't even come to mind (guess it's because I was focusing too much on making it resemble the villain that I'm writing), I think I could create some nice thought conflict within his head to make this work out nice, thanks for the idea! (Funny how I just reviewed a Tale idea and gave basically the same suggestion of a redemption/learning ending)
